Audience response

School showing

Our group have been extended our ideas to make our film into a two minute opening rather than a film. We found faults in our film when showing this to our teacher and a year 11 class. Although everyone really liked it, it was kind of a film not an opening as it had a beginning, middle and an end. This made us re-think about our ideas to follow on.
Bearing in mind we've already filmed most of the scene we just need a few extra too carry on the story line so the audience will want to watch more. We've come up with two ideas we're going to film to see which one fits in better. We have the camera over the Christmas holidays so we'll be filming soon.

First Idea:

- We see the killer getting out from his van. We see the killer in his layre and see him sticking hair to a newspaper article.
- Two girls laying flowers outside there friends house
- Police men talking about the killings
- Then we see flash backs of previous killings:
(Girl strapped to a chair, Trisha walking home from laying flowers and seeing a shadow figure)
- We then return to the killer and see him picking up a knife and leaving, then zoom in on some . articles.
- The police then find his layre.

Second Idea.

- Following on from the previous footage we see the victims best friend laying flowers outside the victims house with the killer lurking in the background.
- She starts to walk home and notices he's following her so she starts running then he catches . . . her.

We're thinking of filming both ideas and seeing which fits in best depending on time. We hop to get this done by the Christmas holidays.