Film ideas - improvements

Film Ideas

So today we had another discussion to discuss other ideas and to improve ideas in the progress. We need to keep in mind that were doing a two minute film opening, not a film. Many of our ideas previously have been changed and a new twist added to make viewers be enticed to see more of it. Here are some improvement ideas we came up with:

• 1. There will be a pan shot of friends laying flowers outside the bath victims house. We will decorate the house and outside to look like a crime scene. we then focus behind them to see the killer in the back ground which will be slightly blurred.
• 2. There will be a two shot of police men showing how seriousness of the case thinking it could be a serial killer.
• 3. There is again a pan around of the killers layre to his wall e.g. pictures and hair of the girls he has killed then going on to quick flash backs of a couple of his murders to give more of an insight to the story. He then picks up a knife and leaves.
• 4. We then see an over the shoulder shot from the killers point of view to the girl as he's walking behind them.
• 5.The police find the killers house and run into it realising he's not thee but find all the evidence. he police will b shown running in at a low angle shots of their feet to show suspense and the panic surrounding. probably with a hand held camera.
• 6. Then we see the girl shut her front door and curtains and sit down but out the back we see the killer standing outside through the glass window.

Adding these extra scene will create a story to carry on (an opening) which audiences will be excited to watch more. We are thinking of having dialogue in the police scene.